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An excerpt from my cringy Self-insert fan fiction featuring Medusa.

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Rider's grip tightened inside RiderFan's collar, her knuckles pressing against his throat. RiderFan could see her pupils constrict underneath her visor. Not with anger, but something far more dangerous. "You asked to know what I wanted?" Her whisper carried the sharpness of a dagger against his ears. "First, stop pretending this is about deserving."
Rider's grip shifted, not once loosening, but sliding upward along RiderFan's collar until her thumb pressed atop his carotid. The heat of her touch seeped through the thin fabric akin to a branding iron.
"You," she murmured, the word vibrating against face, "built an entire dimension to preserve me." Her other hand traced the empty wineglass's stem where his fingers still trembled. "Yet you tremble at the thought of touching me." Her breath was filled of the scent of the red wine she had been drinking. "You hypocrite."

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Deus-Helios said:

79248cm/s and Iruel I feel for both you. I too have experienced such injustice. I used to get bullied a lot too and every time I complained about it to teachers they all acted like I was somehow at fault, that I had provoked them or set myself up to be bullied. All they ever did was bring me and the bully of the week into a room and have us discuss the issue to which he'd lie and make fun of me and I was taught that I had to put up with it so I learned how. Mind you at the end of the day I derive a great amount of satisfaction from the fact that because they never changed they are now destitute losers and I'm a success story. I eventually learned from becoming closer friends with my teachers that the reason they did what they did was simply because they too were scared. Like me scared for the bullies or more precisely the bullies parents and what they might do to their careers. The peculiarities of the racial/social/financial hierarchy of society can be frustrating. I come from a society which practices harsher punishments like beating, encourages teacher intimidation and where teachers are like gods and we never had such problems and while I don't condone abuse I really wish we had more of that where I now live sometimes.

I actually never really got bullied, it was my friends who did. I set up bullies in school until they either stopped or they were moved to another district. Probably what lead me to a vigilantism mindset, but vigilantism is only applicable when rule and law is not enforced.

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79248cm/s said:

I actually never really got bullied, it was my friends who did. I set up bullies in school until they either stopped or they were moved to another district. Probably what lead me to a vigilantism mindset, but vigilantism is only applicable when rule and law is not enforced.

How exactly did you set them up, this sounds interesting.

As for the state of racial relations in RWBY...
Its almost as if RWBY is set in a US where the Confederacy wins the war (in terms of race relations anyway). There is the Slave aspect (as seen with Schnee Dust and their labor). There was a war itself (The Faunus war). And there is the general animosity (shown by the local law enforcers, minor characters, and by Wise before she found Blake to be one).

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Given Velvet can destroy scores of Grimm barehanded, I think school regs are the only reason she puts up with Cardin's team. She could lay all four of them out flat, but it would probably get her expelled.

Granted CDNL is lucky they don't have Reisen. She can destroy a man without leaving a mark.

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I've been thinking on writing a little drabble up, where Velvet goes back into the school courtyard after CRDL bullied her, to where the rest of her team is eating and enjoying the sun. She mentions what happened.

And later, Cardin is cornered by Coco and Yatsuhashi. Since Coco doesn't appreciate someone bullying her best friend, and apparently these darn freshmen didn't get the memo. And Yatsuhashi does not appreciate someone bullying his Honey-Bunny.

Cardin ends up getting dangled out the window, and that's how he overheard Jaune admitting he faked his way into Beacon.

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NightjarInaJar said:

Is that Sunny Milk and Luna Child next in line???

The three fairies were tagged a while back, but someone seems to have removed them. Sunny's larger wings, Luna's crescent wings, and the tip of one of Star's wings are the only things that make them stand out from the other maids, aside from their hair and them being together.

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AlsoSprachOdin said:

Is that how real maids act? I mean, I guess that makes sense with their employer's children...

There's several kinds of 'maid' distinction, this particular one was probably based on governess, which essentially serves as live-in etiquette tutor for higher ups' kids.

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user_553tt897 said in comment #2632560:

It's wild that ai can generate this much, but the details are still nonsense. Like how the tissues are just floating, half the duvet disappears, the text kinda melts.
Amazing concept though, wish someone would actually make it.

Yeah, the bed also too close to the door, its already giving away if its AI made