My translation is pretty basic - please improve it where you can.

The note text reads:

From my house's veranda I can see that on that building
there is something –
furthermore...
on the outer wall
it's growing more dreadful;
from that day on...
it has started to come to my house too...

sightless said:
My translation is pretty basic - please improve it where you can.

The note text reads:

[snip]

It looks okay to me. There's no need to include the text in the comment -- we can read the notes, and you're just adding work for yourself this way. Also, please mind your punctuation, I know it's not properly structured text in JP either, but try to keep it pleasant-looking in English :)

葉月 said:
There's no need to include the text in the comment -- we can read the notes, and you're just adding work for yourself this way. Also, please mind your punctuation, I know it's not properly structured text in JP either, but try to keep it pleasant-looking in English :)

I wasn't sure if all browsers supported the notes, and wanted everyone to be able to read it. I'll stop with the annotations, and translate less literally from now on. Thanks for the comment.

I want Mr. newt on my window, too D:
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